发布网友 发布时间:2024-12-21 06:55
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热心网友 时间:1分钟前
没什么错误 发送吧!happy halloween
热心网友 时间:7分钟前
总体来说还不错,不过有三个地方拼写错误。
I feel we are communicate diffculties that you cant speak chinese and my english is poor......:-(
So please sent(这个是过去式,你应该用send ) it to me ...(my voice is also nice ;-)
Germany and china have jet lag for 7 hours so we cant tall(这个可能打得太快了而错了,应该是TALK, OR CHAT) for a long time(这里用for that long会好些)
Oct 31 will come (这如果用 oct 31 is coming 会好些)
i want to have your picture more ( i want to see more of your pictures)